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Chapter #

"First words of paragraph where the error occurs..."

Error
"...the text with the error..."

Correction
"...what you think I should change to fix it..."


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Grammar:
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Chapter #

"First words of paragraph where the error occurs..."

Error
"...the text with the error..."

Correction
"...what you think I should change to fix it..."


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Other comments/critiques:
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Comments regarding overall characterization, dialogue, plot, pacing, etc., should be placed here.